Further piano development

After re-reading the brief I re-evaluated the direction in which my composition was heading. The brief was more on the natural side of the river and it's journey - therefore i have adapted the theme to be more within these guidelines. I am following an enchanted/darkness route then as the journey of the river progresses the mood/tone would follow this. 


Furthermore - i have put my idea beneath the original ( 2 bottom lines = new idea) to show how it differs. My ideas follow the path of modulation to variate the passage - into d Major. This key change incorporates the idea of changing the tone within a piece.